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Holy crap! Background! Daytona drew a background?! And then, Hell froze over...
This is after using :iconculpeo-fox:'s fox anatomy tutorial: [link]
Everything was drawn freehand, including the cars.
Originally, I had planned out a beautiful forest scene, but... I decided that it's my art, and I'll do whatever I want with it. Obviously, I went a little overboard. The fox is shopping :XD:
The cars in the background were drawn without references of any kind. I wasn't going to draw real world cars, but my hand naturally drew two of the greatest cars of all time.
This is my tenth attempt at drawing a "natural" fox. It took about seven hours to complete and was all done with my .5 mm mechanical pencil and a ruler. The trees were easy! :evillaugh:

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To begin with, I must compliment your ability to illustrate cars, and your keen eye for perspective drawing, and your trees are just stunning.

Now, onto the subject. Indeed, I applaud you in attempting to draw a realistic Fox... but, to make this critique fair, I will offer some constructive criticism. Although I'm not perfect myself, I feel that his ears, although as handsome as they are, are maybe too close together and pointed. At the tip they need to be rounded off a little. Another unfortunate mistake is....he has no neck. If your after absolute realism, then I'm afraid that there maybe a number of little minor mistakes... though I have to say, I quite admire your impression of a fox. I especially like that little flick of his brush at the end. :aww:

But there aren't any major problems with this, or at least nothing that can't be cured by some more practice, and maybe from looking at photographic examples of a fox; if not a real one. :)

The overall composition is a lovely one, and I hope that my advice doesn't hurt your feelings in anyway, and that it may help you along the way with developing your art more.

You do have talent, so don't let my words affect that. I'm merely here to help you, as much as I feel I can.

Keep it up! :D
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:icondtp78:
wow man this is great. and i only see two of the greatest cars ever lol.

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V People should not be afraid of their governments. Governments should be afraid of their people.
:icondaytonablue64impala:
Thanks, man! It's been a long while since I've drawn a Mustang... still got it! :lol: Like riding a bike.

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"I'm ya huckleberry."

Founder of #CheetahsUnlimited
:icondtp78:
i must say man your cars are really good. oh btw the two cars i was talking about was the vette and H2 lol. i hate those types of mustang lol but it is draw well man

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V People should not be afraid of their governments. Governments should be afraid of their people.
:icondaytonablue64impala:
Haha! You could tell that was a H2?! That's actually the first time I've ever tried to draw a Hummer. I was making fun of them, because they can never seem to stay in their own parking space :XD: If you look carefully, he's over the line!
Now, I love the body style of the 2003 Mustang, but their clutches are pure Hell and my head hits the ceiling. They look good, but I'll never look to buy one.

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"I'm ya huckleberry."

Founder of #CheetahsUnlimited
:icondtp78:
lol this is true they never can. and i looks like we haft to agree to disagree. i live in a town that had a ford factory and they was everywhere. to stick out you would have to drive a Honda lol. plus they was the only cars that could beat my Buick lol

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V People should not be afraid of their governments. Governments should be afraid of their people.
:icondaytonablue64impala:
:(

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"I'm ya huckleberry."

Founder of #CheetahsUnlimited
:icondtp78:
lol dont be sad they will get there as soon as i get my SS. btw i got a job

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V People should not be afraid of their governments. Governments should be afraid of their people.
:icondaytonablue64impala:
:dance: Great!

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"I'm ya huckleberry."

Founder of #CheetahsUnlimited
:icondtp78:
yeah now i can start for that car. anyway man how have you been are thing getting better.

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V People should not be afraid of their governments. Governments should be afraid of their people.

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